Rewrite of Chapter 3: Post-Mortem
Did a cold read of last November's NaNoWriMo project (922 Holyoake Road) about George and Isabel, a husband who killed his wife 100 years ago, and his wife/ghost. Frankly, reading it made me tired. Overwritten, repetitive, in serious need of pruning. I've been editing, cleaning, making it more... Sign in to see full entry.