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sometimes we try to conform so much to what everybody else says and not let our story unfold as our characters want it that we hesitate....great read....good job
posted by
Annicita
on March 30, 2011 at 6:16 AM
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I thought it a great read but then i have been editing Tom Ugly for
years and am doing a complete filling in gaps edit this time.
posted by
Kabu
on March 29, 2011 at 9:21 PM
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PatB
Don't know that you could improve much on what I considered perfection in the first version. Love it then and love it now.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 29, 2011 at 9:18 PM
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Pat
I like this one, but like adnohr, I should probably compare it to the previous version. I just haven't got a round twit...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 29, 2011 at 6:34 PM
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I'll get out the original and read it over again, then compare. I can't believe you found it tiring! It is such a good story!
posted by
adnohr
on March 29, 2011 at 10:03 AM
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