for my genre study in on line short stories. I will probably change it drastically in some parts before I submit it anywhere as it is so obviously based on little Red Riding Hood. It is rather amateurish,but it was fun in the writing. I have to do some more planning on The Collectors. There are weaknesses in the story line that need a lot more work. Plus my screenplay on the short story I wrote last year, Two Roads is coming slowly. I know what the problem is -- my male character is too weak and...
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