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Re: Much loving friendship to you ...
Chilitree,

Thanks!

posted by afzal50 on July 15, 2007 at 3:28 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Excellent afzal
dark mistress ,

Thanks!

posted by afzal50 on July 15, 2007 at 3:28 AM | link to this | reply

Much loving friendship to you ...

posted by Chilitree on July 15, 2007 at 12:11 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent afzal

posted by dark_mistress on July 14, 2007 at 11:14 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Afzal myh friend
Cameraeye,

Thanks!

posted by afzal50 on July 14, 2007 at 10:08 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Afzal
Justi,

Thanks!

posted by afzal50 on July 14, 2007 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal myh friend

I learned as a young woman when I left the comfort of my own home and parents, and started working in a far away city, that all men bleed when cut.  Blood is all the same color and hurt feelings results in pain.  So, be rewarded in knowing God loves us every single one of us. I  like you a lot!

Fondly,

Lou

posted by Cameraeye on July 14, 2007 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal
Both strong and gentle and straight to the point. Good poem.

posted by Justi on July 14, 2007 at 9:24 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Afzal
Sunny,

I am truly blessed to be the recipient of your love . Thanks!

posted by afzal50 on July 14, 2007 at 8:27 PM | link to this | reply

Afzal
This is so well said, my sweetie.
I am one who loves you.  You are a very special and unique person. I wish more people understood that.
You have my love.

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on July 14, 2007 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Very strongly worded poem. Powerful.
Dylan,

Thanks!

posted by afzal50 on July 14, 2007 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

Very strongly worded poem. Powerful.

posted by Dyl_Pickle on July 14, 2007 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Good poem.
A-and-B,

Thanks!

posted by afzal50 on July 14, 2007 at 7:06 PM | link to this | reply

Good poem.

posted by A-and-B on July 14, 2007 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: subject of ease
Thanks for sharing your opinions .

posted by afzal50 on July 14, 2007 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

subject of ease

I too am not easy to understand

like my friend A Hussan

not easy to understand

as a human

quite complex

its true

not for you to probe

your stake into

not for you to rape

then take

my offspring

not for you to use

and abuse

like my friends

I am not a bitch either

but brother I have really had it

this bull crap in the middle east

has really got

me mad

and that does not make me a SUBJECT

do don't fucking try it

I am not a subject

for you to investigate

so take your little games

and shove a boot

up a ass

that is not bothered

I am just a human

and boots hurt my ass

got get it out!

get your boot out of my human

ass

I am tired

of the way it feels

to be a srewed human

with this bad reputation

if that be the case

then

I at least want

to be a whore to

who

I want to be fucked by

and not my own government

I am not a subject

I am just a chick with a few opinions

-

posted by Harvardgirl_global on July 14, 2007 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Powerful and meaningful verse, Afzal..I can relate..
RaeS,

VEry true ! I do agree with you . Thanks!

posted by afzal50 on July 14, 2007 at 6:20 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful and meaningful verse, Afzal..I can relate..
If only we all could remember this - our collective humanness - perhaps then we'd have a chance of bringing down the barriers that separate and divide us.

posted by Katray2 on July 14, 2007 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply