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Re: A bit neater..
OUTSTANDING...AMAZING...XXXOOO
posted by
teddypoet52
on January 29, 2017 at 10:24 AM
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A bit neater..
Remembering the song of thy voice,
bathing mine whole with thrills and joy
once unknown. Lyrics of reality
and dreams were reflected and stay in our gaze unending,
swell and pour forth from thine soul:
hard won, gritty, knowing, breathing deep and proud, beautiful You
- unto the womb of this woman's being, flowering here and now,
the morrow and beyond - one music listened sweet and alive.
posted by
Katray2
on January 29, 2017 at 9:43 AM
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Remembering the song of thou voice,
bathing mine whole with thrills and joy
once unknown. Lyrics of reality
and dreams were reflected and stay in our gaze unending,
swell and pour forth from thine soul:
hard won, gritty, knowing, breathing deep and proud, beautiful You
- unto the womb of this woman's being, flowering here and now,
the morrow and beyond - one music listened sweet and alive.
posted by
Katray2
on January 29, 2017 at 9:40 AM
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Re: Re: Re: Re: So very lovely, Ted..
Yes, indeed...
XXXOOO
posted by
Katray2
on January 29, 2017 at 9:29 AM
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Re: Re: Re: So very lovely, Ted..
No fireworks on this phone
But state lines
Are another story
XXXOOO
posted by
teddypoet52
on January 29, 2017 at 9:27 AM
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Re: Re: So very lovely, Ted..
posted by
Katray2
on January 29, 2017 at 9:12 AM
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Re: So very lovely, Ted..
Thanks Kathy! XOXOX
posted by
teddypoet52
on January 29, 2017 at 8:33 AM
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So very lovely, Ted..
posted by
Katray2
on January 29, 2017 at 8:21 AM
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Re:
Thanks Annicita!
posted by
teddypoet52
on January 15, 2017 at 5:38 PM
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Re:
Thanks Kabu!
posted by
teddypoet52
on January 15, 2017 at 5:37 PM
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Re:
Thanks Intern!
posted by
teddypoet52
on January 15, 2017 at 5:37 PM
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Re:
Thanks C C T!
posted by
teddypoet52
on January 15, 2017 at 5:36 PM
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Thanks RP!
posted by
teddypoet52
on January 15, 2017 at 5:36 PM
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nice to see you posting again!
posted by
Annicita
on January 15, 2017 at 4:43 PM
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Nicely put dear Teddy and I love being called Kabuski
posted by
Kabu
on January 15, 2017 at 1:29 PM
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Indeed, they will.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 15, 2017 at 9:22 AM
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Memories that do not die.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 15, 2017 at 7:56 AM
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This is really nice!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 14, 2017 at 4:46 PM
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