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Katray2
Yes, a great story here. I love the ending especially. Great poem. Beautiful work and description and feel. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 29, 2016 at 4:46 PM
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Thank you, Chuck..
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Katray2
on October 29, 2016 at 9:08 AM
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Thank you for the comment and idea, Annicita! 
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Katray2
on October 29, 2016 at 9:07 AM
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Nice poem and the last line sum it all
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 29, 2016 at 7:13 AM
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Now that is a basis of a good short story
posted by
Annicita
on October 28, 2016 at 3:57 PM
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Thank you, Dear Kabu..
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Katray2
on October 28, 2016 at 2:20 PM
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Thanks C C T..
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Katray2
on October 28, 2016 at 2:20 PM
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Thank you, FSI..
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Katray2
on October 28, 2016 at 2:19 PM
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Re: Snodgrass also a part of my mother's side...
Snodgrass was my maiden name, so it's my father's side. Same area, oh wow, I think that means we very well may distantly related, Dear Ted; hmmm, a quite interesting and nice thought, in my view..
Thank you..
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Katray2
on October 28, 2016 at 2:19 PM
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Snodgrass also a part of my mother's side...
Actually from the area you speak of...nice work as always, Kathy!
posted by
teddypoet52
on October 28, 2016 at 12:46 PM
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I breathed in the peace of this quiet place with your writing. For me it is just wonderful.
posted by
Kabu
on October 28, 2016 at 12:13 PM
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Yes pretty near perfect Kat. I suppose we should never really be satisfied or that would be our limit. Well done though it is really good.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 28, 2016 at 10:25 AM
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You have done a great job with this poem...I love how peace is attained at the end.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 28, 2016 at 9:32 AM
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