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shed some light- a poem dedicated to dark mistress

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posted by Harvardgirl_global on August 27, 2007 at 10:25 AM | link to this | reply

shed some light- a poem dedicated to dark mistress

 

shed some light- a poem dedicated to dark mistress

8/27 2007 a poem by Tammie Anderson

Light

Light is pressing on me urging me to shed on you

dark.

your pain swallows me words taken in

read

works fiction

not likely painted

of deep pain like the cacti

prick spine digging into a vein

pouring gushing

the love from your soul

wishing you light

love

in your dark journey

light

life is not that dark

there is also light

seek out your light

fellow poet

I wish you light©

 


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posted by Harvardgirl_global on August 27, 2007 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: robiblue
I'm so sorry to hear about your current situation. I sincerely hope you find someone to share your life with that will love you and your baby respectfully.

posted by dark_mistress_again on August 17, 2007 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

fact or fiction story
I am amazed by this. it its very good and it makes alot of sense. i know what it feels like to be that girl. i have a baby and no man to love. i really related to the whole teenage part about attention but your right it all becomes false love in the end. thank you for this.

posted by robiblue on August 17, 2007 at 6:55 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting beginning to Fiction, Chapter 1.

 


posted by A-and-B on August 15, 2007 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply

speechless... uh speechless.... uh still nothing....

posted by JMO_ on August 15, 2007 at 5:46 PM | link to this | reply

Really great!
And I like this template! It goes well with your nick! 

posted by Matie on August 15, 2007 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply

Angel--fact or fiction--you've written very well indeed! Chris.

posted by Scramble on August 15, 2007 at 12:32 PM | link to this | reply

angel - Despite the disclaimer, there's a lot of truth in here as some
people are like that. 

posted by FoliageGold on August 15, 2007 at 5:45 AM | link to this | reply

Spence....
I meant to say the promiscuous parts weren't. I really have to learn to spellcheck my comments before I leave them...night, sweet dreams!

posted by dark_mistress_again on August 15, 2007 at 3:04 AM | link to this | reply

All the same, Angel, it was well written and that is the main thing. Gotta
crash, talk soon. Nigh, night!

posted by SpencerStreetStation on August 15, 2007 at 2:54 AM | link to this | reply

Spence...
only some of this was truthful to me. Obviously the "promiscuous" parts were. But yes, I'm hoping that I do recognise true love when it knocks...or at least it gives we a good wallop around the side of the head to wake me up!

posted by dark_mistress_again on August 15, 2007 at 2:51 AM | link to this | reply

Angel - this is deep stuff. I pray you allow yourself true love one day wh
en it does eventually knock on the door.

posted by SpencerStreetStation on August 15, 2007 at 1:22 AM | link to this | reply