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I need a little bit of constructive criticism on my story in progress so if you want to go back and read for me? Thankyou all!!! Sign in to see full entry.
Thursday, August 30, 2007
Tuesday, August 28, 2007
STORY PART THREE
Sarah was amazed at how quickly she had walked from the park into the city heart. It’d taken her and Alex almost and hour to do earlier in the evening. She also couldn’t believe that she’d just yelled those words out. What the hell was she thinking? It wasn’t that all she cared about was the sex,... Sign in to see full entry.
Thursday, August 23, 2007
THE STORY PART TWO
Alex could feel himself growing with the thought of taking her. Heck he had no problem doing it right here in the middle of the park! But looking in those eyes and knowing she expected to have her world blown away, he just couldn’t do it. It had to be right, perfect. “I can’t Sarah” his voice was... Sign in to see full entry.
Wednesday, August 22, 2007
UNTITILED
THE FOLLOWING WAS WRIITEN ON THE 23RD OF JUNE LAST YEAR. Nighttime wallowing, masking this decision Ponder the image, I’m alone in this collision, Belief and hope; these doors have opened wide Damned morale and a conscience I want to hide. This season is alive, burning with a regrettable heat I... Sign in to see full entry.
Tuesday, August 21, 2007
A STORY
She was barely a woman and the youthfulness showed in the fresh-faced glimmer of her smile. Porcelain skin untainted yet by the years of sorrow, lips stained red like blood spilt on the thorn of a rose. Her hair black, shiny and chopped to within an inch of its life. A gothic beauty in her own... Sign in to see full entry.
Sunday, August 19, 2007
TICKLE MY SENSES
Lay me down upon your bed of roses Slip the petals across my skin, The silky scent trailing down My nose, My neck Breasts Belly. Blow the warmth of your breath across my mind Drown me in the whispered covets of your lust, Plant your lips upon my earlobes Nibble, nibble... Suck on the tenderness of... Sign in to see full entry.
Saturday, August 18, 2007
Whisper please, scented words of love. Whisper please, hushed longings and lust in my ears. Blow across my mind the tender desires that linger on your tongue, the covets that tickle your imagination. Touch my velvet skin, trace your fingers across delicate flesh leave in their wake a trail of... Sign in to see full entry.
Friday, August 17, 2007
So maybe lust is a better illusion than love. I could touch you more days with the tempest of hope than I could allow my heart to breathe. The washed words flowing over your body flooding away the time of unrequited dreams. I could lay kisses upon your skin trailing down to the swelling of your... Sign in to see full entry.
Wednesday, August 15, 2007
UNTITLED
Would you medicate my soul, Satisfy the growing want for you? To run a taloned finger across your back Down your spine; The creator of lustful goosebumps. To feel your forked tongue Whisper across my skin My tummy, Down to the pits of my womanly cave. To feel the fire of your breath Burning across... Sign in to see full entry.
UNTITLED
I JUST WANT TO MAKE IT CLEAR THAT THE FOLLOWING IS MAINLY FICTIONAL. SO PLEASE DON’T TREAT THIS AS A JOURNAL… Passion for me is something I live everyday. Passion amidst my depressions, passion amidst my mania; and passion for the man I love. My heart seems to be a sponge, soaking up emotion until I... Sign in to see full entry.