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Ironic
So simple, but very revealing.. at the centre of the poem I feel there is the key to the rest of it, in the way that you are unsure about your life, and then you face down the fear and ultimately overcome it. - a lot said in just a few lines.
posted by
mneme
on June 8, 2007 at 5:15 AM
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Thank you all a bunch!!Means a lot to me!
posted by
IronicParadox
on June 7, 2007 at 7:41 AM
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I realy like this poem...
I can relate to it
posted by
dark_mistress
on June 6, 2007 at 4:34 PM
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I P That's nicely written-very good in fact! The most important thing is to
keep on keeping on!!! And never loose HOPE-or sight of your wishes! God bless-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on June 6, 2007 at 1:58 PM
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Hello IP - you seem to be doing OK from this distance - i hope things
get better for you soon!
posted by
Antonionioni
on June 6, 2007 at 1:37 PM
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Troosha!
Thanks for understanding and for your compliment!
posted by
IronicParadox
on June 6, 2007 at 9:10 AM
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Ironic
Keep reading, hearing, seeing, smelling, and feeling. Personal understanding will come. Wonderful piece!
posted by
Troosha
on June 6, 2007 at 8:50 AM
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