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Ariel70, a thoughtful piece
I was doing some Biblical research recently and I noticed how often there were huge battles, with wholesale casualties. It's notthing new, but something to think about in the light of the last verse.
posted by
mneme
on October 19, 2006 at 3:52 AM
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Taps
Thanks for calling in. Yep, guess you're right about some people's attention span. Seems they can't read anything longer than two paragraphs. Thank heavens for people like you, and those others who read me regularly!
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ariel70
on October 19, 2006 at 2:36 AM
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Pat_B
Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you like the intro as well!
posted by
ariel70
on October 19, 2006 at 2:34 AM
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There's good stuff in the lead-in and the poetry...
I vote for both! :)pat
posted by
Pat_B
on October 18, 2006 at 10:05 AM
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Ariel70, I like to have both. I am sure, though, that there are some who would not make it past the introduction to reach the poem and others who would skip the intro wanting only to read the poem. I think one should write what is in the heart and take a chance on being read. Your works are you. When I read you, I see Ariel70.
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TAPS.
on October 18, 2006 at 9:49 AM
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