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Ariel
This was so beautiful. Thank you for writing it. You are a wonderful writer. BB

posted by Justi on November 3, 2005 at 2:24 AM | link to this | reply

Nice work,
good text weaving, interesting point of view makes an old story feel new. :)pat

posted by Pat_B on November 2, 2005 at 6:49 AM | link to this | reply

ARIEL
Excellent work!! I have to go back and read again to find greater understanding!

posted by Offy on November 2, 2005 at 6:48 AM | link to this | reply

A poignant piece

posted by Straightforward on November 1, 2005 at 7:44 PM | link to this | reply

Ariel
I have but one word......WOW

posted by TIMMYTALES on November 1, 2005 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

Ariel,

Will have to read later. I have class tonight. Shadow

posted by Keshet on November 1, 2005 at 2:17 PM | link to this | reply

Avant

And thank you for your comment on my story.

As a matter of interest ; did you guess wha tit was about?

posted by ariel70 on November 1, 2005 at 1:21 PM | link to this | reply

ariel
beautiful piece of work.

posted by avant-garde on November 1, 2005 at 1:19 PM | link to this | reply

Cosy

 

 

 

Thank you for your comment

posted by ariel70 on November 1, 2005 at 12:32 PM | link to this | reply

Ariel
you are a terrific story teller! I have to catch up...wise man!

posted by cosy on November 1, 2005 at 12:30 PM | link to this | reply