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That was very encouraging! Thank you! :)
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posted by
inkdancing
on September 14, 2006 at 7:03 AM
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Impressive
I must admit I’m not much of a fantasy reader, but this is rather enjoyable. This birth scene is very descriptive, easy to follow, and imagine in my mind. The pain of labor and her rage is all so vivid. The dialogue is excellent, seems very believable for the two, the situation, and the age they live in. Looking forward to the rest when I have time.
posted by
SchneiderSeven
on September 13, 2006 at 3:03 PM
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