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Sky5, tank ewe!
posted by
Julia.
on September 13, 2004 at 10:09 AM
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THAT'S NEAT
posted by
Star5_
on September 13, 2004 at 7:12 AM
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katray, thanks.
I'm just jumping in, I have no idea what I'm doing.
I figure I can learn as I go along. 
posted by
Julia.
on September 12, 2004 at 10:03 PM
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Hehe, this is good Quirky, heart expressed and real.
I like poetry that pours from the heart and mind, mostly unfettered and alive. I think if you ponder it too long, over edit, etc. it can die upon arrival.
posted by
Katray2
on September 12, 2004 at 9:45 PM
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MelodyStar, thank you!!
posted by
Julia.
on September 12, 2004 at 9:40 PM
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Thanks Shadow.
I'm just trying to have a little fun.
posted by
Julia.
on September 12, 2004 at 4:17 PM
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Excellent Poem!
posted by
Melodystar
on September 12, 2004 at 3:48 PM
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Kay-Ren--THANKS!!
It's a twisted view but it's all mine, hehe!
posted by
Julia.
on September 12, 2004 at 3:46 PM
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Quirky,
Good work. You are peeking at the world here through the poet's eyes. Keep going with it because this is good expression. shadow
posted by
Keshet
on September 12, 2004 at 6:42 AM
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thanks RachelAnna,
glad I made you laugh!!
posted by
Julia.
on September 11, 2004 at 8:42 PM
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BRAVO!!!! Excellent poem, sis!
My poetry mentor answered when I asked her what bad poetry was, "Well, bad poetry, in my opinion, is poetry, which is trite - unimaginative - weak in imagery, ideas, and/or weak in language. A "bad" or perhaps it is better to say a "weak" poem neither edifies us nor does it expand our understanding of each other or our world. It does not teach us to see something in a fresh way. Bad poetry simply whines or praises - without freshness and without challenge. It does not engage our senses. It tells us what we already know in a dull way."
In this poem, you presented our world of Blogging in an imaginative and interesting way. You helped us see our blogs from a new view point. Good job.
posted by
Kay-Ren
on September 11, 2004 at 3:58 PM
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thanks ladyofshalott,
I'm not going to pretend that I know a thing about poetry, but
everybody has to start at the beginning in all endeavors, right??
posted by
Julia.
on September 11, 2004 at 1:23 PM
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LOL!
Very cute!
posted by
RachelAnna
on September 11, 2004 at 1:14 PM
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Quirky
it's good. I like the blog name too.
posted by
ladyofshalott
on September 11, 2004 at 1:07 PM
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