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Superb!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 17, 2007 at 3:28 PM | link to this | reply

Very intense
I like the fork tongue thing-the devil does touch us with the fevered lust

posted by spanish_dragon on August 16, 2007 at 7:40 PM | link to this | reply

Truly decadent, angel. Nicely done...

posted by saul_relative on August 16, 2007 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

Well angel-that comes over loud and clear-(or should I rephrase that?)--
well written! Chris.

posted by Scramble on August 16, 2007 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

twomany...
you're thanking me? no worries!!!!!

posted by dark_mistress_again on August 16, 2007 at 12:52 AM | link to this | reply

would you medicate my soul
i love that line, that whole image is great.thanks

posted by twomany on August 16, 2007 at 12:49 AM | link to this | reply

wow
not a big prose fan, but that was pretty damn good

posted by thesermystories on August 15, 2007 at 11:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: enigmatic
blissful rebirth! Now that I like the sound of!!!!!! How many times you plannin' en?...lol....

posted by dark_mistress_again on August 15, 2007 at 10:24 PM | link to this | reply

lol....proc you got a laugh out of me!

posted by dark_mistress_again on August 15, 2007 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply

angel
Yes, there wouldn't be any rotting - only blissful rebirth!

posted by Enigmatic68 on August 15, 2007 at 8:04 PM | link to this | reply

Rotting or rutting or it could be rooting....
couldnt resist the play on words to cool the temperature of this poem....

posted by proc on August 15, 2007 at 7:08 PM | link to this | reply

angel - No rotting allowed............

posted by FoliageGold on August 15, 2007 at 6:41 PM | link to this | reply