More of the story
Thanks to those of you who commented on the beginning of my story. Any feedback I can get is appreciated. Here's more of the story. Like the last part, it's not completely edited. It's turning into something luch longer than I'd expected. And I don't have a title yet for the piece, so any suggestions for that are also welcome. This evening is no exception. I watch Sarah and her friends talk and laugh, and feel left out, deciding that its time for me to leave. I quickly tap my roommate on the... Sign in to see full entry.