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posted by Annicita on October 7, 2020 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Corbin_Dallas on October 5, 2020 at 7:20 AM | link to this | reply

This was quite interesting, not only do you explain the changing role of the geese  you included a fun prospect. Don't be so modest you are as bright as can be.

You  wrote a really good story and I shall read it again. I often wished you had written a second one, remember the buried treasure.

posted by C_C_T on October 5, 2020 at 7:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I hadn't thought of hummingbirds as passengers on Canada Goose Lines.

posted by Sherri_G on October 5, 2020 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

It appears that you are much more clever than you think.

This is wonderful writing, just as good as the geese's formation. Those fairies know their stuff.

posted by Sherri_G on October 5, 2020 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

A very nice poem that captures the nature well.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 5, 2020 at 5:29 AM | link to this | reply

I’ll just ditto Jemmie. It’s wonderful  to read your poems and also to learn if the hummingbirds. I love gees, even if they can be unfriendly at times. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 5, 2020 at 1:33 AM | link to this | reply

I don't know poetry...

I suck at poetry...

But I love this!

Thank you!

posted by Jemmie211 on October 4, 2020 at 10:47 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

 Love Canada goose. We have a flock.

posted by BC-A on October 4, 2020 at 10:45 PM | link to this | reply

I hadn't thought of hummingbirds as passengers on Canada Goose Lines.

I wonder how they book those flights.  Thank you for the poem, Kabu.  Unique and symbolic. Love it.

posted by Pat_B on October 4, 2020 at 1:33 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu, I love this!  Now I know how my hummingbirds go so far.  I've been worrying about the long flight they have to warmer climates.  Hitching a ride makes sense to me. We have finally put their feeder away till next year.  It's too cold for them to stay around here.  I miss them already but I know they will be back again next year.  Thank you for making me feel better about my little friends!

posted by Goldiec on October 4, 2020 at 12:50 PM | link to this | reply

I think you are very clever.  I did not know about hummingbirds taking a ride.  Tell me more.

posted by TAPS. on October 4, 2020 at 12:18 PM | link to this | reply