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Re: Re: Re: Kabu
Thanks so much, Kabu. You are a dear one to all, S. Sister. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 9, 2017 at 10:09 PM
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Re: teddypoet52
Thank you. I appreciate that, teddy, expecially since it is a long one.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 9, 2017 at 10:08 PM
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Re: sam444
Thank you, sam. I know it's long so I appreciate it! Glad you thought it was good.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 9, 2017 at 10:07 PM
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Re: Re: Kabu
such a dear S. Sister.
posted by
Kabu
on January 9, 2017 at 9:23 AM
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Excellent, deep...moving indeed.
posted by
teddypoet52
on January 8, 2017 at 4:03 PM
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This is very good, I had to read it again! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 8, 2017 at 2:55 PM
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Re: Annicita
Indeed, a rare one, thankfully for the rest of the world. Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 6, 2017 at 9:54 PM
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quite a panoramic view you had at that moment in time...well done
posted by
Annicita
on January 6, 2017 at 7:15 PM
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Re: Kabu
Thank you, Kabu! I'm so glad that the contrast of that write is so diametrically opposed to your life in Canada now. Such a blessing to live where one likes it. I live near the beach now, and enjoy the air and the small things; flowers, sky, butterflies, birdies, and music, all have a music. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 6, 2017 at 7:07 PM
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Re: Lanetay
Yes, you have some great air there, that's for sure.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 6, 2017 at 7:03 PM
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Re: FSI
It is a compilation of slices of life, collectively it would read as extremely intense. None of it is pretty, no matter how you slice it (pardon the pun). sadly.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 6, 2017 at 7:02 PM
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Re: BC-A
Sounds great to me, Bill! At 52 degrees, you are having what has been California weather lately!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 6, 2017 at 7:00 PM
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Re: CCT
Thank you for your comments, CC! As always, they are much appreciated. One sees the world and observes, and the slant of view is most often different for each set of eyes who look to see. One prefers the light to the darkness, but we can see no stars twinkling unless the sky is dark. hmm, sounds like i just seeded a poem...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 6, 2017 at 6:59 PM
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You took me back to the years of living in inner Sydney. Ah but now, living here in the Woods of Canada, your poem reminds me of why I am happy. I feel sad reading of how life can be but so happy that I am where I am
posted by
Kabu
on January 6, 2017 at 1:36 PM
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not much smog here and not much anything else stinking up and polluting the air
posted by
Lanetay
on January 6, 2017 at 11:23 AM
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One can feel the amount of intensity as one reads your poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 6, 2017 at 9:44 AM
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RPresta
Life's for me, coming outside agin after a cold morning for a peak pleasant 52 degrees briefly. However, by the time that I return indoors, and then go home at night, it's in the 30s again. I guess that, working inside for the second time's my mood in life love.
posted by
BC-A
on January 6, 2017 at 8:26 AM
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Well RP I don't like to feel your misery of this time it actually might bring tears to my eyes.I must admit not many poems affect me and it might be your honesty portraying this wretched time. It is a poets poem and so different from what you supposedly looked forward too.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 6, 2017 at 7:48 AM
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Re: shamesahar
A very good way to express that, indeed. Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 5, 2017 at 11:27 PM
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The eyes and words in tandem here as the sketches take form.
posted by
shamasehar
on January 5, 2017 at 11:17 PM
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Re: Aba
Wow! Thank you, Aba dear, for reading and commenting so nicely and vividly! Yes, quite the sights, I saw! They all became locked into the camera of my mind, quite as you said.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 5, 2017 at 10:53 PM
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Re: sam444
How nice of you, sam! I know it's long, so I thank you very much and appreciate your sweet comment!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 5, 2017 at 10:50 PM
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This is a fantastic poem in all facets! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 5, 2017 at 10:43 PM
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This one is an even better poetess, Presta dear.
I find the style excellent, quite somewhat in the classical mould, in its imagery, as if caught on camera. The fop with bloated belly and lards hanging about is done in the typical literary poetic flourish, for which my kudos and admiration ! 
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posted by
anib
on January 5, 2017 at 8:48 PM
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