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ah but there's no end...only a beginning - this tale shared so much history and of the beauty and Love that still is here with all humanity today...Those children, free from fear and hunger - this really touches my heart and thank you thank you dear Kabuski for sharing your history of Jilly. xoxoxo Connie Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 5, 2011 at 11:59 AM
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Jillie proved to be a wonderful gnome, looking after those little girls...As always I enjoy your gnome tales.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 5, 2011 at 11:06 AM
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Engrossing story! Thanks for your visit!
posted by
Nita09
on July 5, 2011 at 9:15 AM
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That is lovely, and such a sweet image
posted by
lionreign
on July 5, 2011 at 8:31 AM
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How utterly Beautiful and charming, Dear Kabu
loved it, loved it! You are a writer quite blessed!
posted by
Raye09
on July 5, 2011 at 7:46 AM
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Beautiful story! Perfect ending!
posted by
Pat_B
on July 5, 2011 at 5:10 AM
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Brilliant and fun! Now to write one on the BL! LOL
posted by
Ariala
on July 5, 2011 at 5:02 AM
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A beautiful story, and I agree with TAPS. I love an ending that makes me smile, and encourages me to continue the fantasy if I want to. A Kabu story!!
posted by
adnohr
on July 5, 2011 at 4:04 AM
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Kabu you could have gone on and on but I know how difficult it is to write from scratch each day, it was a brilliant effort well done.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 5, 2011 at 2:14 AM
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What a wonderful ending for the 4th of July, one enchanted place the Regime missed.
posted by
mariss9
on July 4, 2011 at 8:46 PM
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Wonderful story and wonderful ending that seemed no ending at all because it leaves room for imaginating all kinds of things.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 4, 2011 at 8:38 PM
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Oh, Kabu, this is such a precious story! I do hope you'll submit it to a publisher.
posted by
reasons
on July 4, 2011 at 7:23 PM
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Kabuiepie-;)
Marvelous writing that just drew me in to snuggle in the quilts and read to those l'il kids. You have a sweet talent that children would love to read whatever you write love.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 4, 2011 at 7:03 PM
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Not sure what's happening to the
sent. Please see as it is something exciting.
posted by
Azur
on July 4, 2011 at 6:25 PM
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Beautiful and heart warming story
you are just too good.
posted by
skye08
on July 4, 2011 at 5:42 PM
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very cute and intriguing story
posted by
Lanetay
on July 4, 2011 at 3:39 PM
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Awww...... everyone enjoys a happy ending. Nicely done, Kabu!
posted by
Troosha
on July 4, 2011 at 2:37 PM
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An absolutely beautiful little story. You write wonderfully--this was a children's story and a political pronouncement on the evil of governments and wars and prejudices. It was outstanding for all, Mom, Dad and the children. You are so good at this.
posted by
Justi
on July 4, 2011 at 1:24 PM
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You are truly a talented writer Kabu... Your stories, this one in particular, are full of life, as if they were descriptions of something you had witnessed in real time rather than the marvelous imaginings of your gifted mind. Bravo my friend... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 4, 2011 at 1:21 PM
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What a lovely read ...... enjoyed it to the last word (and lesson) ....
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on July 4, 2011 at 1:07 PM
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What a lovely ending! I adore it when others take care of the less fortunate and give them a purpose and a reason to go forward! A very nice story of survival that I can liken to events of the day! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 4, 2011 at 1:06 PM
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