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My goodness dear Kabuski - but you are a Poetess --- I'm thinkikng this one should head a book with your writings --- GORGEOUS POEM here - delightful and breezy imagery perfect. WOW! xoxoxo Connie Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 15, 2011 at 7:55 AM
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You captured the essence beautifully! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 14, 2011 at 11:19 PM
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Spring sounds beautiful there whether in poetry or prose. Too bad those dratted mosquitos have to get in the mix. Those dark nights are something else, but a good backdrop for all the lovely things.
posted by
mariss9
on June 14, 2011 at 9:19 AM
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Well, can't say it any better than what everyone else said before me!
Very poetic! It made the BL's jaw drop...now I have to pick up the pieces LOL
posted by
Ariala
on June 13, 2011 at 3:16 PM
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I think you did just write some poetry, sweet lady.
posted by
Troosha
on June 13, 2011 at 12:24 PM
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You describe the sights and the smells so well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 13, 2011 at 12:01 PM
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Kabuiepie-;)
"Hath not the potter power over the clay, of the same lump to make one vessel into honour and another into dishonour?" Romans IX. 21
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 13, 2011 at 8:52 AM
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This is as good as any poem!
posted by
Nita09
on June 13, 2011 at 8:02 AM
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You ARE a poet, Kabu. That was lyrical, and poetry doesn't have to rhyme, these days!
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on June 13, 2011 at 7:54 AM
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Well it was poetical and truthful Kabu You have the ability to dance in the moonlight, well never mind about there being no moon, I can see you out there of course you are only sixteen and slim and golden and that handsome hubby Wiley steering you around the pot plants. Of course you are poetical.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 12, 2011 at 11:03 PM
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very cleverly written. I enjoy reading you girl!
posted by
Samantha39
on June 12, 2011 at 9:03 PM
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But you are ... as Spitfire pointed oit, what you wrote its a poem... because it comes from the heart and is music to the ears... and you were feeling like poets do the beauty of the world, its sounds and smells and textures... not seeing them or hearing them but feeling them and that is what Poetry is darling :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on June 12, 2011 at 8:44 PM
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Sweet Kabu,
Do you not see that this entry IS a poem?
posted by
SpitFire70
on June 12, 2011 at 7:25 PM
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Kabu
w I’m glad that someone likes honeysuckle (vines) love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on June 12, 2011 at 7:20 PM
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I agree with the others, Kabu. This was a wonderful poem full of smells and colors and sounds and feeling!
posted by
adnohr
on June 12, 2011 at 6:36 PM
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Dear friend Kabu...
You have a heart warmer than a poet's,
Sense sharper than the brightest's,
Values purer than a priest's.
Poet or not,
The world you know how to light!
Sincerely,
Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on June 12, 2011 at 5:41 PM
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Oh, you've got the eyes and ears and hands of a poet...
You see. Not everyone does.
posted by
Pat_B
on June 12, 2011 at 5:31 PM
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you certainly painted a nice picture as though it was a well written poem
posted by
Lanetay
on June 12, 2011 at 5:00 PM
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Kabu, if this is not seen through the eyes of a poet, I don't know what is..Love you darling.
posted by
shobana
on June 12, 2011 at 4:13 PM
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Oh my dear that was sheer poetry to my eyes and ears. I loved it, it was visual, emotional and telling me you are connecting with the whole of Nature.
posted by
Justi
on June 12, 2011 at 2:35 PM
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