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Tzippy
Fascinating! I am just catching up with on your travels through the NY subway, and its interesting to see how these explorations become a kind of refuge from the oppressive realities of your house...(I hesitate to call it a 'home')...

posted by Nautikos on August 21, 2010 at 5:18 AM | link to this | reply

Even these years later, your words here ring true as an adolescent - taking us in there with her. A wonderful talent, Tzippy.

posted by adnohr on August 14, 2010 at 9:07 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent writing
which really draws the reader in. I am hoping to read that you get through that tunnel...

posted by malcolm on August 14, 2010 at 12:44 AM | link to this | reply

My heart hurts for you when I read your ordeal
Many Blessings:)

posted by skye08 on August 13, 2010 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

It almost makes me feel guilty as I read of your pain......
yet, I can't help it.   Your writing this story has to be a part of a healing process and we're going along for the ride.

posted by Corbin_Dallas on August 13, 2010 at 6:55 PM | link to this | reply

The Las Summer VI
Great read. joab

posted by joab3 on August 13, 2010 at 1:15 PM | link to this | reply

He can take away my freedom but cannot touch my mind
That was my Motto for the silly 20years that like your Mom, I let someone rule over me, allowed him to ruin every pleasure.

posted by Kabu on August 13, 2010 at 7:36 AM | link to this | reply

A person's mind can do so much in getting them through the tough times. Through this I can tell that your mind did just that.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 12, 2010 at 9:14 PM | link to this | reply

Tzippy, it was fine how your mind created a wonderland beneath the streets.  That's how you survived the torture of being a new American with a new stepfather.  It's what we all do.  Fun reading you + your poems.

posted by dsm_tchr on August 12, 2010 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply

I was happy you made the experience joyful! He is such an ogre!! To claim poor to save money is just awful! He has to be the biggest tight wad! I wonder why your mother did make an exit; it would have been difficult but she might have had to stay married for a period of time for her status, or to become an American! It was just a horrible situation for everyone! sam

posted by sam444 on August 12, 2010 at 6:10 PM | link to this | reply

tzip
Great as usual. Children are so resilient.

posted by TIMMYTALES on August 12, 2010 at 1:56 PM | link to this | reply

sometimes its best to escape through fantasies

posted by Lanetay on August 12, 2010 at 9:14 AM | link to this | reply

Very talented and intriguing  storytelling.  Now I know more about the subways.  Good idea to blank that Crazie out and get something out of your new life.  The attention to detail and memory is impressive.  A wish for new and better things for you, always. 

posted by mariss9 on August 12, 2010 at 8:52 AM | link to this | reply

The Las Summer VI
Tzippy..Very emotional...written so well, will be waiting for your next post/LBJ

posted by MsJudy on August 11, 2010 at 11:47 PM | link to this | reply

Exceptionally written thoughts and words Tzippy..I shared that little fantasyland you delved into while reading you. Thanks so much, good to see you in my blog and I really don't have that much of a dutch courage to walk on coals ..:) but amazing of you to do it.

posted by shobana on August 11, 2010 at 10:53 PM | link to this | reply

Here's wishing you new and bountiful new starts everyday of your life. Each new day is like a fantasy shool beginning day. I am sorry for yours and all those who have to suffer such. Be blessed dear one.

posted by Justi on August 11, 2010 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply