Dave's Classic Haiku and Fauxtrains: THESE GO WITH THE ARTWORK ON DAVE'S POETIC MEANDERINGS!

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Thursday, June 15, 2006

THESE GO WITH THE ARTWORK ON DAVE'S POETIC MEANDERINGS!

It never occured to me to write Haiku about my wife's artwork, but (I forget who suggested it, one of you, please forgive me) one of you suggested that I should so here it is. I lie In Private See the colors in my mind Paint within myself. Time Rain never ends Falls on all of us, we are All tied... Sign in to see full entry.

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I admire the Japanese culture more than any other culture in the world. Their strict adherence to cultural traits and their own personal self-discipline leave me ashamed of my own shortcomings, which are many. However, I feel like I do have an ability to write meaningful Haiku and am disappointed with the many writers of "Haiku" which depart from the traditional "5-7-5" format. Here are some of my works for your enjoyment. Fauxtrains are a poetic style I created myself by accident, thinking I was writing Quatrains. Not sure how I made the error but I like it. They are similar to Haiku in that it is a strict format, eight lines, syllable count of 2-4-6-8-6-4-2 and no punctuation or capitolization. However, Subject matter is completely open, whereas Haiku is supposed to be strictly about nature with no human element! Try it and send me your efforts!

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