Dave's Classic Haiku and Fauxtrains: DO YOU LIKE FLOWERS? CHECK THIS OUT!

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Wednesday, June 14, 2006

DO YOU LIKE FLOWERS? CHECK THIS OUT!

The Periwinkle Meadows purple majesty Numbered like the stars Bright red fire tulips How can I bear the brilliance Shining in the sun? Blue Bells. So tiny Yet you compete against the Greatest of flowers Tiniest acorn Be patient for you will be The greatest of trees Sign in to see full entry.

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I admire the Japanese culture more than any other culture in the world. Their strict adherence to cultural traits and their own personal self-discipline leave me ashamed of my own shortcomings, which are many. However, I feel like I do have an ability to write meaningful Haiku and am disappointed with the many writers of "Haiku" which depart from the traditional "5-7-5" format. Here are some of my works for your enjoyment. Fauxtrains are a poetic style I created myself by accident, thinking I was writing Quatrains. Not sure how I made the error but I like it. They are similar to Haiku in that it is a strict format, eight lines, syllable count of 2-4-6-8-6-4-2 and no punctuation or capitolization. However, Subject matter is completely open, whereas Haiku is supposed to be strictly about nature with no human element! Try it and send me your efforts!

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