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When the one who made the promise no longer exists, having been replaced cell by cell, experience by experience over time, the promise remains unchanged and can be tyrannical about it.
posted by
Ciel
on August 14, 2026 at 6:58 AM
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Vivid imagery. There's something about sleep that can remove things in favor of wonderful slumber!
posted by
sam444
on August 13, 2026 at 6:30 PM
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This poem gives the reader quite a bit to think about. The scary part about commitment is that promises are meant to be broken, according to some people.
posted by
Sherri_G
on August 13, 2026 at 5:19 PM
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beautiful writing and spot on with the truth!
posted by
Graysome
on August 13, 2026 at 3:37 PM
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I love the intense imagery that of which you have used.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 13, 2026 at 1:05 PM
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