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Good Evening
Thank you for sharing this post! I hope you are having a good evening!
posted by
Goldiec
on July 6, 2026 at 3:36 PM
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Re: Sam
Goodness Sam I left school at 14. We were just about to learn shorthand.. Buet reaponso.🌺
posted by
C_C_T
on July 6, 2026 at 12:28 PM
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Is it possible to examine the shreds of illusion
and recover the cold stand-alone-thoughts
between the confusion of wonder and hope?
Yes, probably a smile that was meant for another.
Such a great stanza. The first three lines could form an awesome tercet. The last line could be a monostich. It is still a powerful quatrain! Excellent work!
posted by
sam444
on July 5, 2026 at 9:11 PM
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Love can feel quite heavenly at times.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 5, 2026 at 6:53 PM
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Beautifully written, even if it is a bit sad. 
posted by
Sherri_G
on July 5, 2026 at 10:40 AM
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