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Re: Thank you, Annie

I'll go back and  fix it in the original.
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posted by BigV on July 9, 2026 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

wonderful story...I noticed this typo - you hit enter and it started a new paragraph

He traced the little pencil symbol with one fingertip. Three curved lines, covered by one slash. The symbol was 

Simple, ordinary, and yet impossible. Not because of what it was, but because of what it awakened inside him.

posted by Annicita on July 9, 2026 at 12:34 PM | link to this | reply

I admire the way it has been written. A little jolt would it be wise to park beneath a tree .

A truly musty feeling filters through the mind. Thank you for sharing.   

posted by C_C_T on July 1, 2026 at 11:49 AM | link to this | reply