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I Love Your Plink, Plink, Plink, Plink
Stuff like that makes your writing feel like real life. (I had a leak once years ago and kitchen pans to collect and empty.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 14, 2026 at 7:01 AM
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deeper and deeper I fall into this story. it is good!
posted by
Graysome
on July 13, 2026 at 8:09 PM
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Re: Thank you, Annie
I'll go back and fix it in the original.
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posted by
BigV
on July 9, 2026 at 5:04 PM
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wonderful story...I noticed this typo - you hit enter and it started a new paragraph
He traced the little pencil symbol with one fingertip. Three curved lines, covered by one slash. The symbol was
Simple, ordinary, and yet impossible. Not because of what it was, but because of what it awakened inside him.
posted by
Annicita
on July 9, 2026 at 12:34 PM
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I admire the way it has been written. A little jolt would it be wise to park beneath a tree .
A truly musty feeling filters through the mind. Thank you for sharing.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 1, 2026 at 11:49 AM
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