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Re: Sam

You could write a book on how to give rides on your grand bicycle

I remember once as a boy I started to twist the front wheel back and forth

as I rode down street I was quite proficient at doing until  a police man

shouted at me as he came alongside in a police car.🌺

posted by C_C_T on June 10, 2026 at 10:44 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lo S.G.

Cheers, she is the sweetest.🌺

posted by C_C_T on June 10, 2026 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Sherri

I guess so quite painful unless one is awake. well maybe.

posted by C_C_T on June 10, 2026 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sherri

posted by C_C_T on June 10, 2026 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

Love can feel rather heavenly.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 10, 2026 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

That's the sad part about good dreams; they don't last once one has been awaken.

posted by Sherri_G on June 10, 2026 at 6:45 AM | link to this | reply

Sam444 said U.S. well. Strikingly effective poetry. 🌹😄

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 9, 2026 at 2:29 PM | link to this | reply

Ooooh, grand imagery. The closing set the whole poem in motion. Going along on one plane only to discover in the end it is illusionary but with a marvelous twist! 

posted by sam444 on June 9, 2026 at 1:05 PM | link to this | reply