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Especially after lights-out and before sleep, the consciousness wanders through the gardens of our experiences, and if we're lucky, the ones that are not too embarrassing!
Your poem made me think of this.

posted by Ciel on April 30, 2026 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: BearcatMike

Yes, in a way, we were innocent, playing the gramophone blacking our windows at night playing solitaire by the light of the Aladdin lamp and listening. Cheers.

posted by C_C_T on April 29, 2026 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply

Re: SAm

Well Sam what about the big bloomers women wore. A man told me once that he pinchedย 

a pair off of a clothes line and his mate climbed into one leg and he in the other, then they ran down the street laughing.๐ŸŒบ

posted by C_C_T on April 29, 2026 at 11:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

In a way it was a good age when you were born . It is turning around again once the young girls only had to get pregnant and then they had a Council house and a grant. Now a lot of children stay at home, house prices out of reach./๐ŸŒบ๐ŸŒบ

posted by C_C_T on April 29, 2026 at 11:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: S G.

It was something to write about I did have OCD once and it was worrying to see oddments on the road. Years later I discovered the reason. So many things in early childhood.๐ŸŒบ

posted by C_C_T on April 29, 2026 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply

Re: S G.

It was something to write about I did have OCD once and it was worrying to see oddments on the road. Years later I discovered the reason. So many things in early childhood.๐ŸŒบ

posted by C_C_T on April 29, 2026 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply

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Sherri yes we had trains passing once and it was a real stupid idea to close the track down.๐Ÿฆ‹

posted by C_C_T on April 29, 2026 at 11:15 AM | link to this | reply

It's funny how a garment such as long johns can bring back so many memories. Your uncle Jim was a hard worker if his career choice was the railroad. My great great maternal grandfather retired with the railroad in Maryland. I enjoy hearing the stories that he passed down about the strange things he had witnessed along the railroad tracks. ๐Ÿš‚

posted by Sherri_G on April 29, 2026 at 8:47 AM | link to this | reply

I love the reflective tenor of this poem. It is whimsical and yet heartfelt. Kudos to you! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ˜ƒ

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 28, 2026 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

The older I get i believe the more i look and think about the past, certainly back before mum and dad died in the early nineties. She was born in 1909,he was born in 1911. She was two and a half years older than him and she was 36 when I was born. They couldn't get married until after the Great depression.

posted by Kabu on April 28, 2026 at 3:43 PM | link to this | reply

Rations of snook! At least it was nourishing. I prefer white fish, lol. This poem felt like a piece of oral lore the way it is composed. I love poems like that seem to be telling the tale of years gone by and the fondness for them. Long johns was hilarious. I hadn't thought about them in years!ย 

posted by sam444 on April 28, 2026 at 12:46 PM | link to this | reply

It is difficult to look at the present without looking at the past. Much of the present is the result of the past. I like the funny way you talk about the past. The reference to long johns was so very visual and effective.

posted by BearcatMike on April 28, 2026 at 11:27 AM | link to this | reply

ha

posted by C_C_T on April 28, 2026 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply