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Human kindness can disappear quickly.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 15, 2026 at 6:43 AM
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Re: Re: Sam
Shows see what I mean.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 14, 2026 at 8:43 AM
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Re: Sam
Well Sam, we only have words to play with your reply probably show more skill than the poem.🌺
posted by
C_C_T
on February 14, 2026 at 8:41 AM
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The closing, the last two lines, we're poignant. To receive something heaven sent as it were, then evaporates, certainly gives the impression it was only meant for the receiver. I know there's more in this poem but that is the part that stood out in the first read. The truly awesomeness of your poetry is the layering for me. You start in simplicity, then some lines are complicit (I'm sure you know what I'm getting at with my choice of words), then to a thought provoking conclusion!
posted by
sam444
on February 13, 2026 at 10:55 AM
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