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I loved the nickname Punch for a boxer. It reminded me of a friend from college who was studying law enforcement and we called her Bullet. I like the cliffhangers that are dispersed throughout the post. You have a very interesting family! 

posted by sam444 on December 23, 2025 at 1:19 PM | link to this | reply

When the words flow so well, length isn't a problem!

You do have a skill and a talent for this kind of writing--looking forward to more!

posted by Ciel on December 23, 2025 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

You have an interesting family as most of us do. I look forward to reading more about your people. I also remember wishing to grow up fast, then I turned 21, and I couldn't slow it down. Before I knew what happened, I was 30, 40, 50 etc...

posted by Sherri_G on December 23, 2025 at 7:24 AM | link to this | reply

Sea-Gypsy.....

Don't speed things up too much....  A hurry to the ending leaves out too many things of interest and understanding of things and reasons of things.   You have us hooked you know.  We will be glad to crawl along with you.

posted by TAPS. on December 23, 2025 at 5:04 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Sorry, sweet lady. I’ll try to speed this up. It needs a heavy edit but later. I can’t do it right now. It’s about my mom’s Dad - not my Dad. Sorry it’s not clear. One or two days and it will be finished here. Thank you for reading it. 🌹

posted by Sea_Gypsy on December 22, 2025 at 10:03 PM | link to this | reply

OK OK what are we waiting to hear about your Dad you naughty Cliff hanger girlie!

posted by Kabu on December 22, 2025 at 9:12 PM | link to this | reply