Go to Big V Mumbles About Something
- Add a comment
- Go to Excuses, A Punch Line, and More "Where the River Bends"
Thank you!
Thank you for your kind words about my story. I appreciate ya all!|
V
posted by
BigV
on September 6, 2025 at 2:00 PM
| link to this | reply
More please and have a lovely day with your beautiful wife.
posted by
Kabu
on September 6, 2025 at 11:51 AM
| link to this | reply
More please and have a lovely day with your beautiful wife.
posted by
Kabu
on September 6, 2025 at 11:51 AM
| link to this | reply
I am enjoying all the little nuances. The rhythm is subtle but intentional. Not pushy but understanding. Excellent way to build the readers' interest in the characters.
posted by
BearcatMike
on September 6, 2025 at 9:18 AM
| link to this | reply
Well, alrighty then. I'll say it: more, please.
posted by
Pat_B
on September 6, 2025 at 8:50 AM
| link to this | reply