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Re: FS.
We can only dream, Cheers.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 7, 2025 at 1:25 AM
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Re: Sherri
Yes a slice would be adequate.🌺
posted by
C_C_T
on May 7, 2025 at 1:24 AM
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Re: Sea Gypsy
Thank you one write these things and then they are recovered. Hope all is gentle.🌺
posted by
C_C_T
on May 7, 2025 at 1:23 AM
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Re: CCT.....
I remember saying to my Mother Grampy took me into a place and we had a piddle. She was shocked.🌺
posted by
C_C_T
on May 7, 2025 at 1:20 AM
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CCT.....
.....I like the "prominent legs puddle". You do have a way with words.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 5, 2025 at 11:38 PM
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I agree with FSI. This poem was a delight to read. There's something fascinating about it, perhaps it's the whimsey and the imagery. Very nice.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 5, 2025 at 11:33 PM
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I imagine an arranged date would have a fair amount of dissecting, but if all goes well, the evening may end with a slice of euphoria. 
posted by
Sherri_G
on May 5, 2025 at 5:00 PM
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Really cool mix of humor and melancholy. Loved the imagery, especially the puddle and “becoming legless”—feels deep and a bit cheeky at the same time. Definitely makes you think about how we see ourselves and others.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 5, 2025 at 11:19 AM
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