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Jenny Wren would have delivered the news more delicately I think.

I can just imagine her mother's surprise at Katie knowing about the baby and the news coming from her feathered friend.

posted by Sherri_G on November 24, 2020 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Sea_Gypsy

Thank you for the good wishes. If you read my post in “Theatre of the (Almost) Absurd, you would know how I feel. lol. Snd that’s not as great as I could feel. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 14, 2020 at 11:42 AM | link to this | reply

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posted by Goldiec on November 14, 2020 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Bill

Yes I remember the feeling. FS.

posted by C_C_T on November 14, 2020 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Pat

Well you know how it is Pat they do become real in one's mind.

posted by C_C_T on November 14, 2020 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sea_Gypsy

Thank you S.G. Hope you feel better.

posted by C_C_T on November 14, 2020 at 9:04 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Taps

A lovely thought Taps.

posted by C_C_T on November 14, 2020 at 9:03 AM | link to this | reply

RBill

Chin up Bill.

posted by C_C_T on November 14, 2020 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Goldiec

Thank you, glad that you like it.

posted by C_C_T on November 14, 2020 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply

Good Morning

C_C_T, I absolutely love this story!  It is so heartwarming!

You definitely have a gift for writing!

posted by Goldiec on November 14, 2020 at 6:54 AM | link to this | reply

C.C.T

Oh boy sir.

posted by BC-A on November 13, 2020 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

My Dad had a Mr. Wren friend.  In his retirement years he used to make bird houses of different kinds.  Some were made out of gourds and hung around his garden.  The wren house was made from wood and painted just like a house.  Mr. Wren would come out of the house and they would talk to each other in wren language.

posted by TAPS. on November 13, 2020 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

Well-written and it is an adjustment for a child to have a new sibling in the house. I remember.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 13, 2020 at 3:55 PM | link to this | reply

From my perspective it seems your ability to write from your

character's point of view is very well done and right on target. I am really enjoying getting to know little Katie and learning from her.  

posted by Pat_B on November 13, 2020 at 11:02 AM | link to this | reply

I can just picture Katie's poor legs not keeping up.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 13, 2020 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply