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I shall dream about the bruised ghost. At least it will not be a nightmare.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 5, 2020 at 7:45 PM
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Re: Re: Goldiec
C_C_T, that is so interesting!
posted by
Goldiec
on October 5, 2020 at 4:19 PM
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Re: Kabu
Oh! dear one would rather linger in anticipation. Now please dearie don't be so tragic.
I bet many a young man had the hots for you.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2020 at 10:34 AM
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Re: Goldiec
Well moderate perhaps, I'll try and find a gypsy one my Dad was made a blood brother to a gypsy we used to tease him about it at times.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2020 at 10:30 AM
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RePat
Thank you Pat it is always a job to finish a poem as you know. My key board is losing its letters I keep sticking tabs on but they do not last/
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2020 at 10:28 AM
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Re:Bill
In the breeze Bill.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2020 at 10:25 AM
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Re: Sea_Gypsy
Thank you SG. Hope things are getting better.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2020 at 10:25 AM
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Re: FS
That's good FS.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2020 at 10:24 AM
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Re: Another amazing piece. You are pure talent my friend.
Thank you sassy a lot are old poems just revised.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2020 at 10:23 AM
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Another amazing piece. You are pure talent my friend.
posted by
Sherri_G
on October 5, 2020 at 8:01 AM
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It strikes me as very intense.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 5, 2020 at 5:33 AM
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Wonderful. Great last line.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 5, 2020 at 1:35 AM
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C.C.T
Healthy scents now sir.
posted by
BC-A
on October 4, 2020 at 10:47 PM
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I was lollygagging along, just enjoying the poem until that last line
knocked me out! Nice work.
posted by
Pat_B
on October 4, 2020 at 1:35 PM
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C.C. you are an awesome writer!
posted by
Goldiec
on October 4, 2020 at 1:34 PM
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Wow...Now this is a poet. I hope that arrow goes clean to the heart so death is instant.
posted by
Kabu
on October 4, 2020 at 11:37 AM
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