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For now, 'Interdimensional.' I changed the last two paragraphs to fit your suggestion that I not call it a date. I took that verbiage out and left it sorta 'ambigous.' They can still 'hold hands,' but I took the word 'date' out of the story. I did allow Kim to verbally slap Max. I figured he deserved it.
The other story will require me to go back over it make sure it flows properly. Right now, I sit down and start writing based on what I last wrote. I know that I will have to rework the first part of 'Interdimenstional' as well as I didn't make it clear that Bruce had finished high school at 16 and had moved forward into college during the summer semester. A lot of what 'Bruce' is doing was based on my own high school to college trajectory. I graduated high school at 16 and was in college two days after I marched for graduation. I took 18 credit hours that summer. I was crazy, but you knew that.
I am copying your suggestions into a Word document, and I will be weaving most of them into the rewrite before publication.
I sincerely appreciate your assistance with this project!
posted by
BigV
on June 21, 2020 at 7:05 PM
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Are you talking about Interdimensional or the other one?
posted by
Annicita
on June 21, 2020 at 6:45 PM
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Thank you!
posted by
BigV
on June 21, 2020 at 6:13 PM
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looking
forward to the next read. best of luck.
jesse
posted by
jessejean12
on June 21, 2020 at 5:25 PM
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