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Oh to be ten again. Sweet and innocent.
Our beautiful granddaugter Chloe is ten. I remember that age fondly. 
posted by
Sherri_G
on June 23, 2020 at 11:13 AM
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Shams-i-Heartsong
Thank you Sir . Keep well.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 20, 2020 at 10:43 AM
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Re: shamasehar
Thank you shamasehar. There are some poorer families , mothers cannot always work.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 20, 2020 at 10:41 AM
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Even at that age the desire to earn money is vital in some families.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 20, 2020 at 10:39 AM
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Re: It feels like the very thought pattern of a 10-year-old... Nice work!
Thank you Pat as I told Kabu ,I hope not.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 20, 2020 at 10:37 AM
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Life seen through the eyes of a ten year old.... innocent & simple though tough. Your poem creates a day in her life so realistically.
posted by
shamasehar
on June 20, 2020 at 10:36 AM
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Re: Kabu
Perhaps second childhood is beckoning , Truth is stranger than fiction.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 20, 2020 at 10:36 AM
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Re: ciel
Thank you Ciel
posted by
C_C_T
on June 20, 2020 at 10:34 AM
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Re: Sea Gypsy
Thank you, SG. hope all is well.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 20, 2020 at 10:33 AM
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Re: FS
I know the feeling FS.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 20, 2020 at 10:33 AM
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This brings me back to when I was learning how to drive. Dad did a whole lot of swearing while teaching me.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 20, 2020 at 5:30 AM
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So realistically told! Just wonderful to read.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 19, 2020 at 8:51 PM
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posted by
Ciel
on June 19, 2020 at 7:48 PM
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Wonderful and you truly do get inside of a child's mind and produce something so real it is perfect.
posted by
Kabu
on June 19, 2020 at 2:22 PM
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It feels like the very thought pattern of a 10-year-old... Nice work!
posted by
Pat_B
on June 19, 2020 at 1:53 PM
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10? She's a bit young to be late???
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on June 19, 2020 at 12:20 PM
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another great poem
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on June 19, 2020 at 11:56 AM
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