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I am very curious to see where your story goes...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 26, 2017 at 11:32 AM
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It is sadly realistic , but you have solved a problem that worried me, The taking of liquids which I saw reacted by an old nurse and I often thought why not a little drink not a frenzied sucking of the swab. We all come to it eventually.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 26, 2017 at 7:26 AM
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Dear Kabu,
What a beautifully written story. I do hope you continue it.
posted by
Amanda__
on July 26, 2017 at 7:21 AM
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As one who's lost someone in lingering misery, this is gut wrenching.
As a writer, I'm bowing to your ability to blend the graphic factual details with the metaphysical ones. Well done, Kabu! 
posted by
Pat_B
on July 26, 2017 at 4:29 AM
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That is a sad little story, but so true. My sister-in-law died a few months ago and it reminds me of her.
posted by
mariposa75
on July 25, 2017 at 7:05 PM
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Kabu
Oh, my dear, sweet Kabu, a sad tale it is, but so well-written. Dear friend, my poem today is a poem of hope, and though each person reacts differently to a particular piece of poetry, I was saying that no matter how low or sad one feels, how bad it is, somewhere inside comes the strength to make it out of the tunnel of despair into light and love. Or rather, I was trying to say that... At least that's one way to read it.
I thought, when you said you were inspired to write a story, it would be about how, after all you have been through in life, you made it into to light by finding your Wiley, and your life now. Dear Soul Sister, please don't plan on leaving us for a very long while. That's the story, the story of you and Wiley, I would like to see you write, sweet lady.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 25, 2017 at 5:17 PM
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Extra, Kabu! The emotion evoked by these simple, realistic words is extra. GREAT writing!
posted by
adnohr
on July 25, 2017 at 5:17 PM
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Kabu
I don't like this story either! But the fact that you're still typing on your keyboard tells me appearances may be a bit deceiving...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 25, 2017 at 3:48 PM
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what??? I do not like this story... 
posted by
-blackcat
on July 25, 2017 at 3:12 PM
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