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Re: Re: Kabu
OUch...he is having a rough time.
posted by
Kabu
on May 9, 2017 at 7:36 PM
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Re: Sam
' I guess it happens to us all Sam if we can remember.Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 8, 2017 at 10:52 AM
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Re: Kabu
Thank you , and you take care, poor old Archie is in bed with a pain , not serious but I think he has torn himself in an awkward place, he will have to be more careful.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 8, 2017 at 10:50 AM
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Re: PResta
I really must try and write more new stuff RP. But my friend Archie is ill at the moment and I have to do his chores as well.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 8, 2017 at 10:46 AM
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Re: GoldenMean
Well GM it is of course what you would like to think it could be. It was rather more mundane thoughts that occurred as I wrote it , a kind of coming into being as a life force.
Interesting how it might be perceived.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 8, 2017 at 10:43 AM
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Re: Bill
All is never what it seems Bill.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 8, 2017 at 10:39 AM
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Imagery and sensation well done sir.
posted by
BC-A
on May 8, 2017 at 9:49 AM
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You have done a great job conveying the imagery to us.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 8, 2017 at 5:48 AM
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CC
I am not a regular fan of poetry, but I see this one as special. It sounds to me like a spiritual passage of the soul, from one bodily life to the next, as in reincarnation, including the loss of memory of the last life. Am I right? Cheers 
posted by
GoldenMean
on May 7, 2017 at 10:29 PM
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Most excellent! Touching. Full of emotion.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 7, 2017 at 4:46 PM
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incredibly beautiful...full of sadnes, courage, pain, longing. One of the best.
posted by
Kabu
on May 7, 2017 at 11:55 AM
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This is sterling! I could relate to it completely! (S)well done, indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 7, 2017 at 11:38 AM
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