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I like showing the essence of the person (or in your case, the non-human animal) in my writing as well...I would say that there are bears with different traits.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 22, 2017 at 9:03 AM
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. No good writing it on here or no one will want to buy it. That's the bear I mean the bare truth . Anyway it is a good mental exercise and I an sure it will come into fruition The mill grinds slowly, but it grinds fine , i could never understand the significance of that saying.. 
posted by
C_C_T
on March 22, 2017 at 7:29 AM
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I'm glad you are still going on it. I'm reading a book now where it seems half of the writing is telling what each person is wearing. That seems a little unnecessary to me.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 22, 2017 at 5:30 AM
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It's best to let your characters decide or they kick up quite a fuss!
posted by
Annicita
on March 21, 2017 at 5:39 PM
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I think good dialogue is essential for a characters development. Also, bears are a lot smarter than we think!
posted by
shelly_b
on March 21, 2017 at 5:36 PM
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Kabu
I would rather read good character description and dialogue than padding describing how green is my valley... lol. I'm sure Bruno is going to be a hit and I can't wait to read it all.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 21, 2017 at 5:13 PM
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I think the development of a character is better when it's about the character and not the what it wears and so forth! Your sam I am
posted by
sam444
on March 21, 2017 at 4:39 PM
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of course bears must all have their own personalities... Yogi and Boo Boo come to mind... LOL
posted by
-blackcat
on March 21, 2017 at 3:57 PM
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Kabuiepie;-)
Great photo's love and this story will be another winner for you. I love you.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 21, 2017 at 3:51 PM
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