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Re: Re: Kabu

you did write the sequel and I am so glad.

posted by Kabu on November 6, 2016 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Taps

I would imagine that there have been several near civilizations that have been obliterated by  the changes on the planet Taps. We just don't know. 

posted by C_C_T on November 6, 2016 at 7:03 AM | link to this | reply

Re: A

Thank you A.

posted by C_C_T on November 6, 2016 at 7:00 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Naut

Yes it is a bit difficult to convey what was on the walls it seemed to be sloping lines with different marks behind which I took to be the the different line of the tribes I think they were sloping because it was the way in which the bodies were disposed. Little bumps on the lines probably meant it was a woman and the short ones a child. Perhaps the main character was the Step hen Haw King of his period. Thanks for reminding me.   

posted by C_C_T on November 6, 2016 at 7:00 AM | link to this | reply

CCT

A Neanderthal's memories - well done! Even if they didn't write - but of course they thought...

posted by Nautikos on November 5, 2016 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply

Nice job cct

posted by Annicita on November 5, 2016 at 1:56 PM | link to this | reply

Wow!  How interesting.  I spent some time in the National Museum of Natural Sciences in Madrid Spain when I was there.  I loved their studies and dioramas of caveman life in Spain. 

posted by TAPS. on November 5, 2016 at 12:55 PM | link to this | reply

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Yes even today I can see my name which I carved on the Church pillar Bill.

posted by C_C_T on November 5, 2016 at 10:26 AM | link to this | reply

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Well this obviously was a long time ago when we were more like hedghogs and slept a lot in winter. Thank you.

posted by C_C_T on November 5, 2016 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you RP . As I told Kabu not really suitable fo here. I just like doing something different at times.

posted by C_C_T on November 5, 2016 at 10:22 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Yes not really suitable for poetry, I won't bother to write the sequel. Chinup.

posted by C_C_T on November 5, 2016 at 10:20 AM | link to this | reply

One can feel the isolation while reading your poem...It reminds me of Simon and Garfunkle's "I Am a Rock."

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 5, 2016 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

🙀Writing’s preservation sir. BC-A Bill’s R👀st

posted by BC-A on November 5, 2016 at 8:28 AM | link to this | reply

C_C_T

Yes, it does remind me of that book also. An imaginative subject matter with lots to think about. How hard it must have been to survive in those days. Well told. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 4, 2016 at 1:56 PM | link to this | reply

This reminds me ot the Books of the children of the earth.

posted by Kabu on November 4, 2016 at 12:58 PM | link to this | reply