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Yes I noticed it.  I saw  a few typos but once you put it in word it should highlight the few errors.  Thank you for paying attention to the comment and not being offended.  I look for feedback on my stories and poetry as well.

posted by Annicita on October 28, 2016 at 1:34 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Kabu on October 27, 2016 at 3:56 PM | link to this | reply

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I'm never offended dear. I found out a long time ago that thoughts, feelings, and ideas are based on 'POV," 'Point of View.' I read a LOT of world newspapers and I see what is being fed to people and most of it is just plain wrong. Everyone has an agenda, you just have to know the agenda of the person to whom you are speaking or reading!

posted by BigV on October 27, 2016 at 9:39 AM | link to this | reply

actually I did notice that, but decidedthat like me, you weren't puting the whole book into here. Today I sounded off big time in your post ...shows you how good the story is because I got right into it and completely forgot that it was a real country I was critical of. Please don't be offended.

 oh and I was touched to be thanked in one of your books!

posted by Kabu on October 27, 2016 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply