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Re: Re: Kabu

I don't know why emails won't get through. I am thinking of changing the name of the manuscript

posted by Kabu on October 24, 2016 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: ChiffChaff

Goodness Bro you must have the Golden touch

posted by C_C_T on October 24, 2016 at 8:24 AM | link to this | reply

ChiffChaff

Beautiful love poem Bro

posted by WileyJohn on October 23, 2016 at 5:39 PM | link to this | reply

CCT

Pretty safe if you never meet! If she does as Kabu suggests you do have a problem, and Arthurs doesn't strike me as the kind of man who'd take her off your hands. You might want to check out the bakeries in the neighborhood for suitable assistants...

posted by Nautikos on October 23, 2016 at 11:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Well he obviously had the dough. That is a long comment, if she had done that, i would have to do the honourable thing and introduce her to Arthur. Stop kicking me Chumpet, I

will tell you a story in a moment.

 

 

posted by C_C_T on October 23, 2016 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Taps

An error dear me that's really naughty, I feel contrite.

posted by C_C_T on October 23, 2016 at 11:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nicely expressed and well flowing, C C T..

Hm' Mostly I have been met with cold apprehension Kat. I suppose I was outclassed.

posted by C_C_T on October 23, 2016 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FS

One or the other FS.

posted by C_C_T on October 23, 2016 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

After she read such words she decided to cross the ocean and walk the desert, to swim the rivers and escape from slavery. When they met she found he was tall dark and handsome BUT  she discovered he had paid someone to write the words so ...she reversed all of the above and went back home and married the bakers assistant.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2016 at 10:39 AM | link to this | reply

Great.  Well done.  Fun read.
I am more awake today and paid so much attention that I even noted your typo in the poem.  LOL

posted by TAPS. on October 23, 2016 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply

Nicely expressed and well flowing, C C T..

Or perhaps the twain have met and sweetness and warmth are the memories fain..? Just a thought evoked from your verse..

posted by Katray2 on October 23, 2016 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply

I wonder if it is being spoken to he or simply thought by the speaker.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 23, 2016 at 6:31 AM | link to this | reply