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Re: Re: Re: Kabu
You should wear a white rose and a promise, 
posted by
C_C_T
on October 10, 2016 at 11:41 AM
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Re:Presta
I thought you could put it in a poem, don't tempt me.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 10, 2016 at 11:40 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Sorry for your pain. As to the seal, perhaps one day...but I've told it all already. Thanks
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 9, 2016 at 9:32 PM
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Re: Re: Kabu
I don't wear one!!! I stay in my day clothes.
posted by
Kabu
on October 9, 2016 at 5:46 PM
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Re: Kabu
Now I don't want to keep seeing you in your nighty Kabu.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 9, 2016 at 6:14 AM
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Re:RPresta
As you know RP. some poems take off and that is in away the compensation. Of course in all there is an element of truth, sometimes painful to disclose. One day if you are in the mood I would love to read your experience in poetical form as to when you swam with an inquisitive seal. They can bite I believe.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 9, 2016 at 6:13 AM
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Re: Re: I was there; see--I have a foto to prove it CC. shalom dear Poetic Soul
Yes Taps , better looked at from a photograph I know quite a lot of grown men who do not like to climb a ladder. A wonder of the world in a way.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 9, 2016 at 6:04 AM
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Re: UKUSA
I suppose ones inner thoughts surface and I would not like to look down into your somewhat beautiful abyss the last one I saw I fell into it but was saved, some might call that a religious experience, anyway it was a relief.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 9, 2016 at 6:00 AM
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Re: FS
Yes I suppose in life . in poetry one tries to imagine. Cheers FS.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 9, 2016 at 5:53 AM
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Re: Bill
Gottcha Bill thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 9, 2016 at 5:50 AM
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Definitely brought back memories of mountain top experience for me.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 9, 2016 at 12:39 AM
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Re: I was there; see--I have a foto to prove it CC. shalom dear Poetic Soul
Looks like Havasu Falls and Havasu Creek twelve miles down the canyon from Hualapi Hilltop. Quite a hike down and back.
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TAPS.
on October 9, 2016 at 12:37 AM
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C_C_T
Yes, I agree with FSI and all, but also the speaker has, on one hand the power to control the dream, yet allows the dream to control him, allowing the design to be one that she has formed. Perhaps the stakes are too high; as ...it is a dangerous game. Quite interesting. And quite enjoyable. Very good and descriptive poem.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 8, 2016 at 10:46 PM
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The speaker of your poem is at a real crossroads in life. And the stakes are high. To me, it looks like either life will be great or life will be ruined.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 8, 2016 at 6:18 PM
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I was there; see--I have a foto to prove it CC. shalom dear Poetic Soul
posted by
NocrossJustchristmas
on October 8, 2016 at 12:43 PM
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CCT, sitting at the cliff's edge, the abyss, below ... the elements crash
headlong into your poem, your creativity. Every season, every element from wind, to sun, to water, and fire seems to mingle seasons and blur the line between memory/loss and dreams/lusts. Powerful stuff; liked that you want, so very much, to respect her "innocence" & not expose her completely, to elements & all. Alelujah
posted by
NocrossJustchristmas
on October 8, 2016 at 12:42 PM
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Suspense and flowery imagery makes this poem good.
posted by
BC-A
on October 8, 2016 at 11:56 AM
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posted by
Kabu
on October 8, 2016 at 10:51 AM
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your last lines are typically more powerful --U did it again
Liked it, but I need to re-read a few times. With poem I read for the feeling and ambience first; later I try to get the intention fo the writer. Looking 4 resonances, that's my type. Shalom CCT
posted by
NocrossJustchristmas
on October 8, 2016 at 10:16 AM
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