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Re: Re: Re: Re: Kabu

 I did not need a long fluffy blonde and ginger nose!!!!!!!!!!!

posted by Kabu on September 10, 2016 at 4:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

I hope it is not copy-write A,

posted by C_C_T on September 10, 2016 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re:Wiley

Gottcha Bro, take it easy.

posted by C_C_T on September 10, 2016 at 6:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: Kabu

I mean't to send the instructions I hope it is not fixed in the wrong place, these potato spells are a bit difficult at times.

posted by C_C_T on September 10, 2016 at 6:34 AM | link to this | reply

Reminds me of the book Horns by Stephen King's son Joe HIll

posted by Annicita on September 9, 2016 at 7:11 PM | link to this | reply

ChiffChaff

Wiley was here to say howdy Bro.

posted by WileyJohn on September 9, 2016 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you I accept. Fluffy is nice.Gingery blonde I think.

posted by Kabu on September 9, 2016 at 11:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FS

My comment to you should have an I at the beginning I think the emotion ate it.

posted by C_C_T on September 9, 2016 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Ciel

 Thank you Ciel.  I am sure Charlie could do much better, I think I shall have to take up drinking in moderation.

posted by C_C_T on September 9, 2016 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

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You can have a tail, no problem, I will send one to you and it will be fixed as you sleep.

 I think you might like a long fluffy one, handy for dusting and swatting flies or mossies.

I have this little friend.  

posted by C_C_T on September 9, 2016 at 9:51 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FS.

Think you know more about the structure of poems than I do FS. Thankyou.

posted by C_C_T on September 9, 2016 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply

Re: RPresta

Thank you, RP. I must now try and get rid of the darn things. 

posted by C_C_T on September 9, 2016 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Taps

Well he does look just like my Uncle Albert exept for Uncles pot belly.

posted by C_C_T on September 9, 2016 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Chuck

Thanks Chuck nice to see you around.

posted by C_C_T on September 9, 2016 at 9:37 AM | link to this | reply

Great imaginations and thanks for sharing 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on September 9, 2016 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply

CCT

i agree with Ciel. It is a surreal story that comes full circle and very well told. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on September 9, 2016 at 1:03 AM | link to this | reply

Great post!

 

posted by TAPS. on September 8, 2016 at 10:43 PM | link to this | reply

I like how you arranged your poem with the four line stanzas at first before they give way to lines. That does a great job showing gthe flow of thoughts of the speaker.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 8, 2016 at 5:50 PM | link to this | reply

i always wanted a tail. Still do actually. so glad you got your horns.

posted by Kabu on September 8, 2016 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply

This reads like a dream... very dreamlike images and flow, confusions and sudden alterations that make a strange kind of sense... Kind of like Charlie's 'devised performance.' And the last bit brings it full circle around to proving the point stated at the start.

posted by Ciel on September 8, 2016 at 8:39 AM | link to this | reply