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nice littlke poem, yes the change of season is starting to become obvious at night when its actually chilly

posted by Lanetay on August 21, 2016 at 8:35 AM | link to this | reply

Your poem well-captures just how the seasons flow on by. It is hard to believe that summer is only for about another month. I think what also adds to the surprise element is that we really did not start getting summer weather until about a month ago.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 21, 2016 at 6:26 AM | link to this | reply

It's just exactly right... the poetry and the photo... Nice page

for your album. 

posted by Pat_B on August 21, 2016 at 4:54 AM | link to this | reply

Well done! You've created a picture of the seasons up here in the 'true north', and in so few words too.

posted by adnohr on August 21, 2016 at 12:27 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu

I love your poetry and I love your flowers! All just beautiful! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 20, 2016 at 7:11 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely...just like you.xx

posted by lovelyladymonk on August 20, 2016 at 2:50 PM | link to this | reply