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Re: Re: Re: C_C_T

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When you turn into a bit of fluff

I'll be prepared to face rejection.

posted by C_C_T on June 14, 2016 at 11:38 PM | link to this | reply

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Oh, really!!! Yes, I imagine that's what they all would say, or have said, 'Not worth blogging...' Hah ha!  I personally have thought of at least 15 or 20 fourth lines for it. And you are right, none of them are worth blogging. It could almost be a contest, "Write the Last Line." LOL! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 14, 2016 at 9:01 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: Charmed, I'm sure!

A barmaid I think, it might be cold in the winter with only a little bow to keep you warm.

posted by C_C_T on June 14, 2016 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Charmed, I'm sure!

Milkmaid, Barmaid, or a small bow...?  

posted by Ciel on June 14, 2016 at 5:17 AM | link to this | reply

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I could tell you a little tale about a milkmaid. but she, Oh! perhaps not, I was only a young man. But I did write a little poem about your kiss. Just for amusement. Not worth blogging though. 

posted by C_C_T on June 13, 2016 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

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I can't help it the milk tastes more creamy.

posted by C_C_T on June 13, 2016 at 7:28 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Charmed, I'm sure!

Did you ever fancy being one Ciel?

posted by C_C_T on June 13, 2016 at 7:27 AM | link to this | reply

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I know I do miss them FS.

posted by C_C_T on June 13, 2016 at 7:13 AM | link to this | reply

Sweeet all the way through, and the ending, perfect! "Ain't that just like a man..." 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 12, 2016 at 10:01 PM | link to this | reply

very sweet love.

posted by Kabu on June 12, 2016 at 12:35 PM | link to this | reply

Charmed, I'm sure!

posted by Ciel on June 12, 2016 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

You have done it again with another great poem, using the words and symbolism excellently.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 12, 2016 at 6:38 AM | link to this | reply