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Re: shamasehar
Oh, thank you, shamasehar! I didn't mean to do that in the beginning, but it did come out that way! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 13, 2016 at 10:51 PM
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They rhyme so well together. Loved it.
posted by
shamasehar
on May 13, 2016 at 4:41 AM
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Great! I tried a couple some years back. It was fun but I don't remember how they turned out.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 12, 2016 at 10:24 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Kabu
Thank you again; they are beautifu. I knew...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 12, 2016 at 12:57 PM
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Re: Lanetay
Thanks, Lanetay!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 12, 2016 at 12:55 PM
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Re: Re: Kabu
yes Apple dear S. Sister.
posted by
Kabu
on May 12, 2016 at 12:44 PM
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short but sweet
posted by
Lanetay
on May 12, 2016 at 7:54 AM
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Re: WileyJohn
Thank you, Wiley. It's new for me, tanka. I thought it was supposed to be a bit mysterious... 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 11, 2016 at 8:32 PM
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RPresta
Lovley rhyme poetry, mysterious love.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 11, 2016 at 6:06 PM
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Re: BCA
Such a sweet thought! Thank you!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 11, 2016 at 5:42 PM
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But the melody lingers on.
posted by
BC-A
on May 11, 2016 at 2:54 PM
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Re: Nautikos
Thank you, Naut. The message could apply to any 'him' and 'her.' I am thinking of a bit I read about Henry VIII telling his wife (either Jane Howard or Catherine Parr, I think), "Lady, quit plucking on that harpstring..." when she was merely trying to get him to reuinte with his daughter at Christmas, which he did do. The point being, the sweetest sound, even that of a harp, can become annoying or meaningless when heard too often, I suppose. (Hence the term "quit harping...") As for tanka, I need all the scope I can get. LOL! Glad you have the ability to do haiku and tanka.
For speech-to-text, why not try out SIRI on the "Notes" app on your iPhone, if you have one of those, to see how you like it? You should look into getting a program like that for you 'puter, at least on a trial basis, I think.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 11, 2016 at 11:16 AM
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Re: Katray2
Thanks, Katray2! Fun, yes, but for me, a bit restrictive. Had to try one, though.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 11, 2016 at 10:59 AM
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Re: FSI
Yes, life is better with music.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 11, 2016 at 10:58 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Thanks, CCT! Yes, they do look like cherry blossoms. Thanks for the nice compliment, but blossom may be a stretch here... LOL! And your other comment made me laugh out loud! Glad you liked it!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 11, 2016 at 10:57 AM
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RP
Very nice - and of course mysterious! One does ask oneself of the relationship between 'him' and 'her'...Tanka offer a bit more scope than haiku - I did one not too long ago. But I'll probably stick with doing the odd haiku - there's less typing involved, and I totally hate and detest typing more than is absolutely necessary! Maybe I should get myself one of those 'Speech-to-Text' thingies that would allow me to dictate stuff into my 'puter, but I've heard they haven't been perfected yet, so maybe I'll wait. Oh well...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 11, 2016 at 6:32 AM
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Nice work; tankas are fun..:)
posted by
Katray2
on May 11, 2016 at 6:10 AM
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Sad it is when the music stops.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 11, 2016 at 5:35 AM
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Look more like cherry RP. I am sure no one could resist you if you blossomed. I wonder why the Japanese have to torture themselves. Oh yes I liked it.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 11, 2016 at 12:22 AM
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Re: teddypoet52
Thanks, teddypoet52. I'll take it! LOL!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 10, 2016 at 6:52 PM
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Re: Kabu
Thank you, dear S. Sister! And, the blossoms are beautiful. Apple? I can't tell...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 10, 2016 at 6:51 PM
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Yup.
posted by
teddypoet52
on May 10, 2016 at 6:39 PM
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I think it is excellent and having read how could it be anything but what my S Sister wrote...rhyme.
A gift of Spring blossoms for you.
posted by
Kabu
on May 10, 2016 at 5:59 PM
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