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Re: Re: Some people are lucky to have me for a friend.
The cloud soaked water in a spout.
went back to land and spat it out.
posted by
Kabu
on May 6, 2016 at 3:55 PM
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Re: Some people are lucky to have me for a friend.
I would much rather have you as a friend . But what a sad little cloud I hope it had parachute.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 5, 2016 at 10:25 AM
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Re: RPresta
I know Rpresta Kabu is like a grandmother to me. No! I didn't mean it honestly.
You should not say things like that Chumpet. Go and sit in the shoe box, I must answer this nice lady with decorum. Thank you RPresta.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 5, 2016 at 10:16 AM
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Lovely!!!
posted by
shamasehar
on May 5, 2016 at 10:00 AM
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They are usually grey here FS.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 5, 2016 at 9:54 AM
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Re: CCT
I know Naut, once for some reason I kept taking the old fellow off, I don't think anyone woul like me to post`'I was so lonely in my shroud. I had no time for ails and ills.' 
posted by
C_C_T
on May 5, 2016 at 9:52 AM
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Re: C.C.T.
Only in the bath Bill, but I like the water real soapy.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 5, 2016 at 9:48 AM
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C.C.T.
🎨Were you drinking sir? Bill’s R👀st
posted by
BC-A
on May 5, 2016 at 8:54 AM
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CCT
I know this is a variation on a theme by Wordsworth: 'I wandered lonely as a cloud' , and who also encountered daffodils, although they didn't get rained on, LOL...But why not? I like yours too...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 5, 2016 at 8:53 AM
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I love the use of personification with the cloud, something we do not see often in poetry.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 5, 2016 at 4:51 AM
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I love it! Such a delightful poem. And Kabu's too!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 4, 2016 at 4:11 PM
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Some people are lucky to have me for a friend.
the wind blew my out to sea,
sadly t'was the end of me.
posted by
Kabu
on May 4, 2016 at 2:41 PM
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