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Don't say things you might regret.
No I was not talking to you Horns, we'll go and sit in a thorn tree, I might have two bumps coming on my forehead.No she's not an Angel, pull this thorn out of my er leg. 
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C_C_T
on April 26, 2016 at 12:27 AM
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ha and you think that I am frightened of a little Devil????
posted by
Kabu
on April 25, 2016 at 6:16 PM
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No you might find a cloven hoof.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 25, 2016 at 7:19 AM
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It is not the thunder Lanetay that won't scorch you.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 25, 2016 at 7:18 AM
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tee hee then I shan't come and visit for if I cannot paint your toe nails then what is ther point....Wiley won't let me either.
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Kabu
on April 24, 2016 at 5:39 PM
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rain with thunder freaks me out
posted by
Lanetay
on April 24, 2016 at 7:24 AM
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Don't try and make me envious, you have succeeded;
I am toe ashamed toe say I would not like to foot the bill.
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C_C_T
on April 24, 2016 at 7:06 AM
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always 
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Kabu
on April 23, 2016 at 4:09 PM
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We all dream of a bit of affection unless we already have it on tap.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 23, 2016 at 10:07 AM
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CCT
You perfectly show her underlying desire through the 'disconnects' at the surface of her ruminating - psychologically very astute! Very well done! 
posted by
Nautikos
on April 23, 2016 at 7:43 AM
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Have a good weekend FS.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 23, 2016 at 6:15 AM
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You capture the theme of poverty well in your poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 23, 2016 at 5:33 AM
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I guess it is the way one sees it. Look afer your toes.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 23, 2016 at 12:11 AM
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Cheers Kaserhoe;Keep smiling
posted by
C_C_T
on April 23, 2016 at 12:10 AM
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Very great
I liked the way you described the situation and the thoughts. The writing was perfectly detailed without getting too "heavy". 
posted by
kasperhoe
on April 22, 2016 at 1:00 PM
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so lonely but it captures the feelings and the longing and the misery of poverty.
posted by
Kabu
on April 22, 2016 at 9:20 AM
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