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Go on then RPresta surely you can knock one up about the old mattress. I used to love to fall into my great aunt's spare bed it was feathers or down, I can still feel it now, if I jump into it before it disappears. I suppose I could capture it for moonlit flights.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 22, 2016 at 6:49 AM
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You are sooo correct! I shall withdraw my comment! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 22, 2016 at 12:53 AM
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Re: To All - About This Poem
Dear me RPresta never reveal your inspiration. Or you are transformed from the mysterious to why did you need a new mattress? Well I suppose there is element
of joy immediately. Now I keep thinking of my Uncle Albert in his his night shirt.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 22, 2016 at 12:43 AM
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Re: WileyJohn
That's how love should be! And also a new mattress! LOL! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 21, 2016 at 10:03 PM
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To All - About This Poem
Part of the seeds of this poem lie (pardon the pun) in a new mattress, a Hybrid (what???). Reading the manufacturer's tag, I noticed a certain percentage of assorted foams, and a separate listing of 7 percent micro-diamonds! Sure... (I'll have to cut off the tag for exact numbers!) My mind immediately converted that info into what later became this poem: 'Lay me gently on a bed of seafoam...and diamond dust...'
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Sea_Gypsy
on April 21, 2016 at 10:02 PM
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Re: Nautikos
Thank you for enjoying it. Then I wish for you dreams like that. Prosaic, hah, I'll match that and raise you one about the broken new stove!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 21, 2016 at 9:47 PM
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Re: C_C_T
A haircut? Well, I guess I dream could do that to a person! LOL! Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you very much. I imagine many things appeal to young men...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 21, 2016 at 9:43 PM
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Re:teddypoet52
Thank you, Teddypoet52! I'm glad you think so. Very kind of you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 21, 2016 at 9:05 PM
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Re: Lanetay
It is a bit of that, I agree! Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 21, 2016 at 9:04 PM
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Re: Kabu
Ahh, dear S. Sister, so glad you enjoyed it. And thank you and the moonlit fairies for your kind thoughts.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 21, 2016 at 9:03 PM
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Re: BC-A
They do glimmer and maybe even shimmer!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 21, 2016 at 9:01 PM
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Re: Katray2
All I can say is, thank you for that, S. Sister, and warm wishes your way. It means a lot to hear nice things. Hope you are feeling better.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 21, 2016 at 9:00 PM
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Re: FSI
Thank you and pleasant dreams to you, and to all! But more than that, I wish to thank you so much for the kind words and post about me! I just saw it tonight, and was thrilled, shocked, surprised, pleased and humbled! So very nice of you. I do appreciate it, a lot! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 21, 2016 at 8:58 PM
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Re: kasperhoe
What a nice description of feelings! It makes me feel good to know that. Thank you!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 21, 2016 at 8:54 PM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you for saying that, TAPS. I appreciate it very much. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 21, 2016 at 8:53 PM
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RPresta
Sounds like love as soft as a cloud.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 21, 2016 at 5:44 PM
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RP
Beautiful! I wish I'd have a dream like that! Mine are usually much more prosaic...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 21, 2016 at 3:30 PM
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Excellent...
posted by
teddypoet52
on April 21, 2016 at 12:47 PM
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very sexy and coloful
posted by
Lanetay
on April 21, 2016 at 12:38 PM
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I love it....
Stand in the moonlight and the fairies will take you there. Passion for just one night will be yours dear S. Sister.
posted by
Kabu
on April 21, 2016 at 10:39 AM
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Well I couldn't resist, what am I saying. Well suddenly I know I need a haircut. I think this would appeal to a lot of young men who think they are falling in love.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 21, 2016 at 9:59 AM
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The lines glimmer.
posted by
BC-A
on April 21, 2016 at 9:50 AM
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Lovely and nicely, warmly hued, RP!
Adds a dreamy texture to the rainy day here..
posted by
Katray2
on April 21, 2016 at 8:32 AM
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A very dreamy poem that of which you have written.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 21, 2016 at 5:41 AM
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What a beautiful piece
of poetry.
I really enjoyed the feelings I had from the poem. So warm, comfortable and just... beautiful.
posted by
kasperhoe
on April 20, 2016 at 10:59 PM
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Very pretty wording.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 20, 2016 at 9:56 PM
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