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Re: WileyJohn
Oh, right you are about the typeface! So sorry about that. This one was difficult to format. I'll try to work on that. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 10, 2016 at 1:12 AM
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Re: TAPS
That's what I saw also - well, not you, LOL, but who and what you saw, and when... Thank you. Glad you are back.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 9, 2016 at 9:43 PM
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So well done. I could see myself, and loved ones, in all of it--so many bygone years.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 9, 2016 at 9:01 PM
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Re:Katray2
I appreciate your thoughts so very much!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 9, 2016 at 8:36 PM
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Powerful and poignant!
posted by
Katray2
on April 9, 2016 at 6:34 PM
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RPresta
An emotional heart awakening that only needs a larger typeface for these aged eyes to read easier.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 9, 2016 at 5:26 PM
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Re: Nautikos
Wow-eee! What a touching compliment you have bestowed upon me! I am humbled when I say thank you! And what a lovely idea, for I do have bits and pieces of a book that I would dearly love to finish-or start to finish, as the case may be!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 9, 2016 at 4:29 PM
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RP
This is beautiful - but above all thoughtful, and I mean that in the literal sense of the word! It touches on so much that has to do with our passage through life that it could form the introduction to a book! Bravissima! 
posted by
Nautikos
on April 9, 2016 at 4:20 PM
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Re: teddypoet52
Thank you, it means a lot to hear that.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 9, 2016 at 2:29 PM
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Re: BC-A
Thank you, I did edit a bit. Will probably post another version.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 9, 2016 at 1:56 PM
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Re: C_C_T
You are correct. It is very optimistic. But that was a bit of my point in this version. They will be as we were/are. That's the way of the world.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 9, 2016 at 1:55 PM
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Re: Raysongs
Glad you liked it. You are right though, they will know everything, as did we...but that was my point. There is another version I had written. I may post that.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 9, 2016 at 1:54 PM
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Re:FSI
Thanks, lots of them, for sure!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 9, 2016 at 1:51 PM
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Fortunately optimism is usually inherent in the young. As you suggest it will continue.
Of course we all probably expect too much, the gentle rhythm of your poetry forms a soothing structure.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 9, 2016 at 11:02 AM
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The imagery, nostalgia, and emotion works great.
posted by
BC-A
on April 9, 2016 at 10:00 AM
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very well put
we can only hope that the knowledge we gained from our own lives and tragedies is heeded when passed on to the next gereation..usually not though..loved it
posted by
Raysongs
on April 9, 2016 at 8:16 AM
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Outstanding as usual...
posted by
teddypoet52
on April 9, 2016 at 7:56 AM
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Your poem is rich in themes.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 9, 2016 at 5:31 AM
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